A Comrade
You lie amidst stars
Sheathed in murky darkness
Clothed in a white garb,
With sporadic blotches
You sink into the sea
Ensconce within trees
Levitate above peaks
Hover alongside owls
I lie down
Under the star-spangled awning
Gazing at you, Ogling at you
Hearkening to you, Feeling you
You focus on me, smile at me
Coo sweet-nothings into my ear
Your beam pecks my cheek
Your warmth pervades into my spirit
I get to my feet, to move
You do not leave me alone
I saunter, you saunter too
I twirl, you twirl too
I believe you, to be my faithful companion
I trust you with my entire heart
I bid you good night and step into my reverie
I dream of 'us' , prancing in the meadows
I dream of us, floating in the blue blue sky
I dream of us, pirouetting, with the trees
To the tunes of the wind
The cock crows, the birds chirp
I wake up from the trance
There is brightness all around me
There is daylight, there is sunshine
There is luminescence, but there is no you
I search for you, I pine for you
I rummage among the sea, trees, birds and the mountains
I can hear you say "I am right here"
I can feel your warmth, regardless of the heat
I cannot see you
I am still searching for you
I am craving for your presence
Sheathed in murky darkness
Clothed in a white garb,
With sporadic blotches
You sink into the sea
Ensconce within trees
Levitate above peaks
Hover alongside owls
I lie down
Under the star-spangled awning
Gazing at you, Ogling at you
Hearkening to you, Feeling you
You focus on me, smile at me
Coo sweet-nothings into my ear
Your beam pecks my cheek
Your warmth pervades into my spirit
I get to my feet, to move
You do not leave me alone
I saunter, you saunter too
I twirl, you twirl too
I believe you, to be my faithful companion
I trust you with my entire heart
I bid you good night and step into my reverie
I dream of 'us' , prancing in the meadows
I dream of us, floating in the blue blue sky
I dream of us, pirouetting, with the trees
To the tunes of the wind
The cock crows, the birds chirp
I wake up from the trance
There is brightness all around me
There is daylight, there is sunshine
There is luminescence, but there is no you
I search for you, I pine for you
I rummage among the sea, trees, birds and the mountains
I can hear you say "I am right here"
I can feel your warmth, regardless of the heat
I cannot see you
I am still searching for you
I am craving for your presence
7 Comments:
so sweet and touching:-) good job!!
Touching indeed! Nice poetry.Good theme.
Keep more such posts coming!!
Sathej
enakku english theriyaadhunu nee nila nila odi vaa paatta laam english translate panna naan emara maatten!!!:P
ok enuiff kidding around....nice ode to the moon...small and sweet..
Hi
Ur blog template is blends with the posts ...cool
And the poem is nicely written and it reminded me of something that i am trying to forget...dont know why..
TC
I'd love to say something equally profound, but your verses always have a way of shutting me up. :-)
~speechless~
It may seem strange, but I saw the sun that exists in a night sky, rather than the moon, as the focal point of your poem.
I came across this through random bloghiking and am I glad. This is so...beautiful.People have made meaningful expressions cliches but believe me when I tell you I mean it:)
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